I fixed her nose .... :D...
and the final .. I kind of like her eyes ..
The ink is a "primary magenta".. I got that as part of a set .. It is this baffling pinkish red that scares me every time I try to use it .. Michaels sketch book is cheapest of the lot and yes, it is appalling with Watercolor/washes - the paint bleeds through the paper but I am warming up to it especially for this kind of sketch ..