Welcome to the Weekly Fiction Prompt
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Stories from the Previous Week
Thank you to who posted a story for last week's prompt: "I think I'm being followed":
- @marriot5464
- @estilodereba
- @kinganny
- @terrybobs
- @zerah
- @adese
- @perfect20
- @phyna
- @rinconpoetico7
- @blaqbarbie
- @ukrajpoot
- @daoza
- @popurri
- @jjmusa2004
- @jennyzee1
- @coolbabe88
- @rachie05
- @rare-gem
- @amarachi22
- @abigail04
- @iammmema
- @offia66
- @lightpen
- @terjix
- @ridgette
- @littlepiggies
- @bipolar95
- @agmoore
- @nancybriti1
Author Shout-outs
We'd like to call out a few stories that got high marks from our curators this week.
@lightpen
Curator comment:
@lightpen really has some talent. In this story he tells the tale from a woman's perspective, about a serious trust breach and the expectations of the boyfriend that she let him see her phone. She is not cheating on him, but she has a very good reason not to allow him to see it, as she works for the secret police and it is an official phone. He doesn't trust her and tries to bully her into letting him see it to make sure she's not texting with other boyfriends.
But the remarkable thing is the spat between the MC and her best friend, who keeps trying to provide reasoning why the boyfriend might be acting that way, and the MC ends up frustrated and angry that the friend isn't supporting her. It's very realistic, both as a "human condition" situation where people don't see eye to eye, but also as an example of something that you can easily imagine happening between two very good friends.
They make up the next day. And she resolves to go explain the situation to the boyfriend and why in her role, with her official phone, she can't let him have it. Instead, he doesn't let her finish a sentence. He demands that she choose between loyalty to him and to her job. She chooses the job.
@nancybriti1
Curator comment:
@nancybriti1 writes a powerful, poignant and mysterious story about a man who falls down stairs and is whisked away to the hospital where he nearly dies but is resuscitated. This is all narrated by someone who is there by his side, but ultimately we come to realize that the patient cannot see her. She is a presence, but unseen. His daughter comes to see him, and he proclaims, "I think I'm being followed." She shushes him, but then he says "it's here." The daughter tells him again that he must remain quiet according to the hospital staff directives, and that she already lost her mother and does not want to lose him too. The narrator decides to leave, but intends to come back when he is ready for her to show her face, and we realize that she is the wife and mother who has passed on.
@blaqbarbie
Curator comment:
@blaqbarbie's achievement in her story is to make the prompt secondary to her plot. The story focuses on the protagonist, on Lara. She is musing about her life. She is fussing (possibly unfairly) about her assistant. Lara is self-centered and self-absorbed. We get pulled into her ruminations. The sense of being followed is in the background. We almost don't notice it. She almost doesn't notice it. But she does. At the story's climax she does go into the street. She is terrified by a van that pulls up. However, the van doesn't have a stalker inside. It has her assistant. Lara is relieved. We are relieved. Then we are shown the figure of a man lurking under a street light, truly a stalker, and we remember how this story actually began. Lara was reading an article that told of a serial killer. We realize in that moment that Lara has had a close call, a glancing encounter with death. The story comes full circle. The article, the stalker, and Lara safely driving away with her under-appreciated assistant. This is a very well-constructed, well-told story.
Fiction Writing Prompt of the Week
This week's prompt is: "Hidden camera"
Welcome to the prompt of the week. Video and surveillance cameras are everywhere these days. - They capture the license plates of speeding drivers. - They give security personnel a view into the activities within the building they are guarding. - They record the activities in a place of business so they can be reviewed later if there has been an incident. - Security cameras give residents in a home a view of who is knocking on their door, and if someone is trying to break in, or has taken a delivered package from the doorstep. - Cameras also can provide a record of the activities of a nanny or maid.
Hopefully these examples are giving you all kinds of ideas for stories! What if your character discovers something they didn't know about their hired help? What if a security officer recognizes a person who is robbing the facility they are guarding? What if your character looks at the security camera for their home when the doorbell rings and sees that the person standing there is a person they used to date before they got married, and secretly still love?
We look forward to seeing the story you come up with for "hidden camera."
Good luck. Remember, as always, we are looking for the elements of story. These include:
- Great first lines
- Good settings
- Well-developed characters
- Integration of action, dialogue and narrative
- A conflict that intrigues the reader
- A "story arc" which results in the resolution of the conflict and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion
- And of course, we are looking for well-edited stories that are not littered with typos or grammatical errors — please use the free Grammarly tool for grammar and spelling checks (and not AI writing or rephrasing tools for revising)
You can find more on all of these topics in the catalog of storytelling tips.
If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators: - 50 Loglines - 50 Story Ideas - 50 Imagination Ticklers
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Past Prompts
Here are the past prompts if you would like to use them or refer back to them: #1: Heart and Soul; #2: The moment when...; #3: Beauty with a twist; #4: The Way Home; #5: A Matter of Time; #6 50 Story Ideas; #7 The Library; #8 All the way to tomorrow; #9 Legend; #10 Three Words; #11 World Building; #12 Childhood Summers; #13 50 Imagination Ticklers; #14 Railroad; #15 Cats - 750 words; #16 Your Birthday; #17 Action, Dialog and Narrative; #18 Change; #19 Tea Time or Tee Time?; #20 Summer Camp; #21 Main Street; #22 Fireworks; #23 Picnic; #24 Run; #25 A word of advice; #26 Winding road; #27 Mirror; #28 Shipwreck; #29 School Notes; #30 Three Words: Scooter, River, Midnight; #31 Flash Fiction Contest; #32 A Fork in the Road; #33 Shadows; #34 Three Words: Island, Witch, Cake; #35 Full Moon; #36 Graveyard; #37 Jack-o-Lantern; #38 Family Ties; #39 Longing; #40 Feast; #41 Gift; #42 Season of Light; #43 Believe; #44 Elf; #45 Holiday; #46 New Year; #47 Unlikely Hero; #48 Inheritance; #49 Under the Light of the Moon; #50 Three Words: Shoes, Mood, Adventure; #51 They're Here; #52 Artist; #53 Headlights; #54 Tomorrow; #55 Lense; #56 Perfection; #57 Making and Breaking Rules; #58 A Reckoning; #59 Blossom; #60 Temptation; #61 Happiness; #62 Footprint; #63 Frequency; #64 Sailing; #65 Fortune; #66 Worry; #67 Adventure; #68 Shadow; #69 Motor; #70 Embarrass; #71 Proud; #72 Guide; #73 Impression; #74 Lost; #75 Wonder; #76 Tear; #77 Splash; #78 Brilliant; #79 Sinkhole; #80 Exhaust; #81 Roll; #82 Wishbone; #83 Chatterbox; #84 [F