The Inkwell Fiction Prompt #214

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Stories from the Previous Week

Thank you to who posted a story for last week's prompt: "Spring Surprise":

@oyebolu
@gertu
@popurri
@marriot5464
@joyyyy
@edith-4angelseu
@tranquil3
@jennyzee1
@bisolamih
@rammargarita
@gabmr
@falco96
@whatmidesays
@abojode
@offia66
@ghost-art
@zain-ab001
@daeze-winnie
@bipolar95
@rinconpoetico7
@perfect20
@demmybabs
@stone4
@faithwellington
@farahikram

Author Shout-outs

There were some fantastic and creative stories from this prompt! Here are a few stories that got high marks from our curators this week.

@rinconpoetico7

First Greenery

Curator comment:

In this perfectly executed story, @rinconpoetico7 presents an epic tale of heroism. The Urus live in a frozen land. They prosper. Their neighbors, the Neomicantes, who are human-like, but have claws and blue skin, muster on the hill that overlooks the Urus' land. An attack is imminent. The Urus rise to their defense because they recognize that the Neomicantes' goal is to annihilate all Urus. The battle rages. The snow falls as bodies tumble to the ground. Suddenly, a distant star rises in the sky. Heat melts the snow, and with it the Neomicantes, who apparently cannot withstand the heat. The battle is won. The Urus live on. This story is beautifully told in a voice that carries its epic nature.

@bipolar95

One to Remember

Curator comment:

@bipolar95's story has many strengths. The author creates a realistic, vivid scene for us as she introduces a child and the child's mother. Details offered bring these characters, and their challenge, to life. Their challenge is to face the death of the child's father. He has been off fighting a war, a war that has kept mother and child confined to the home because of the dangers outside. The twist to the story is that although declared dead, the father eventually does come home. He had been in a coma for months. Although he is injured, he is alive. The family rejoices at this true spring surprise. Although the husband's return stretches credulity a bit, this does happen. People have been declared dead and have 'miraculously' come around. The author worked hard on this story. She put all the pieces together and created a backdrop for the family drama that is believable.

@popurri

What the Wind Brought

Curator comment:

A beautiful and colorful story is @popurri's answer to the call of fiction. The author plays with readers' feelings in a very deft way, moving them from curiosity to tension, from tension to fear, and from fear to tenderness. It was a pleasure to read, as it should be!

Nicely done, writers!

Fiction Writing Prompt of the Week

This week's prompt is: "Humble Pie"

"Humble pie" is a funny expression that is about admitting one is wrong. And then that person must "eat humble pie." For example, let's say your character continually boasts that she is going to impress everyone with her special dish at the community picnic. But when she cuts into the dish, it is somehow raw in the middle and burned on the bottom. "Oh no!" she might say. "That didn't turn out as I imagined at all. I guess I'm going to have to eat some humble pie!"

Here are some examples provided by ChatGPT of a person having to "eat humble pie":

After bragging all week about how easily he'd win the tennis match, Jake had to eat humble pie when he lost in straight sets.
She dismissed everyone else's ideas at the meeting, but ended up eating humble pie when her plan completely backfired.
The CEO had to eat humble pie and publicly apologize after the company's new product failed spectacularly.

We hope those examples inspire your creativity!

Good luck. Remember, as always, we are looking for the elements of story. These include:

Great first lines
Good settings
Well-developed characters
Integration of action, dialogue and narrative
A conflict that intrigues the reader
A "story arc" which results in the resolution of the conflict and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion
And of course, we are looking for well-edited stories that are not littered with typos or grammatical errors — please use the free Grammarly tool for grammar and spelling checks (and not AI writing or rephrasing tools for revising)

You can find more on all of these topics in the catalog of storytelling tips.

If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators: - 50 Loglines - 50 Story Ideas - 50 Imagination Ticklers

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Past Prompts

Here are the past prompts if you would like to use them or refer back to them: _{#1: Heart and Soul; #2: The moment when...; #3: Beauty with a twist; #4: The Way Home; #5: A Matter of Time; #6 50 Story Ideas; #7 The Library; #8 All the way to tomorrow; #9 Legend; #10 Three Words; #11 World Building; #12 Childhood Summers; #13 50 Imagination Ticklers; #14 Railroad; #15 Cats - 750 words; #16 Your Birthday; #17 Action, Dialog and Narrative; #18 Change; #19 Tea Time or Tee Time?; #20 Summer Camp; #21 Main Street; #22 Fireworks; #23 Picnic; #24 Run; #25 A word of advice; #26 Winding road; #27 Mirror; #28 Shipwreck; #29 School Notes; #30 Three Words: Scooter, River, Midnight; #31 Flash Fiction Contest; #32 A Fork in the Road; #33 Shadows; #34 Three Words: Island, Witch, Cake; #35 Full Moon; #36 Graveyard; #37 Jack-o-Lantern; #38 Family Ties; #39 Longing; #40 Feast; #41 Gift; #42 Season of Light; #43 Believe; #44 Elf; #45 Holiday; #46 New Year; #47 Unlikely Hero; #48 Inheritance; #49 Under the Light of the Moon; #50 Three Words: Shoes, Mood, Adventure; #51 They're Here; #52 Artist; #53 Headlights; #54 Tomorrow; #55 Lense; #56 Perfection; #57 Making and Breaking Rules; #58 A Reckoning; #59 Blossom; #60 Temptation; #61 Happiness; #62 Footprint; #63 Frequency; #64 Sailing; #65 Fortune; #66 Worry; #67 Adventure; #68 Shadow; #69 Motor; #70 Embarrass; #71 Proud; #72 Guide; #73 Impression; #74 Lost; #75 Wonder; #76 Tear; #77 Splash; #78 Brilliant; #79 Sinkhole; #80 Exhaust; #81 Roll; #82 Wishbone; #83 Chatterbox; #84 Foil; #85 I can't believe you said that; #86 Boo; #87 Midnight; #88 [Hunger](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/the-ink-well-prompt-88-plus-weekly-challenge-and-prize-announce}